Changes that I need to make:

1st Paragraph - 

• Rewrite the first paragraph. Rephrase the sentence 'Britain relived in the remembrance of the events of 9/11'. 

2nd Paragraph-

• Before the example of 'Family Guy' add the quote 'Muslims and Arabs have long been negatively portrayed in America. This negative stereotype is evident in songs,jokes, comic books, novels, Halloween masks, advertising, wrestling, television, cinema and many other forms of American popular culture'. 
• Move the marxism quote to somewhere else in the essay?

3rd Paragraph - 

• Rephrase the paragraph, grammer mistakes. 
• Talk about the power of the whites in the past, Britain as a strong european power, denied others freedom. 
• Refer to postcolonialism

4th Paragraph 

• Analyse the text Britz.
• Talk about how it is a self -reflective text 
• Reflects the zeingest 

5th Paragraph 

• Representations in Mind your language 

6th Paragraph 

• Talk about how the white young dominant male has to resolve the conflict between the characters. 
• Post 9/11 media in comparison 
• Moral Panics

7th Paragraph 

• Refer to Levi Strauss when talking about binary oppositions 

8th Paragraph

• End the essay referring back to the question of representation 

Other things to include in the essay:

• Refer to the moral panic that are created by the mainstream media
• Hegemony 
• Analyse Britz
• Look at Guardian Article 
• Grammar mistakes